well..... [not critique... just pointing something out]
if she only has 48 hours... how would you make that into a manga...
the manga would have to be spaced out over a period of time of her trying to get her friend back... so maybe 48 hours would only work for 1 book or a short story, rather than a manga.
see, i try to write stories similar to mangas all the time. however... i always find so many flaws in the story...
shinu iracassa and irrata hinawaro are best friends since elementy school never had a fight or left each other alone they where very close like sisters until they walked from school a shadow man came and kidnapped irrata and disappeared into a different dimension called "half life and death". shinu has to get to that dimension and to save her friend from the shadow man and the only way to do that is to join a circus to find clues and to get closer to where he is hiding irrata she only has 48 hours to find her and get back or else they will be stuck in the dimension forever. will shinu find her friend irrata or will she be stuck in the dimension forever....
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if she only has 48 hours... how would you make that into a manga...
the manga would have to be spaced out over a period of time of her trying to get her friend back... so maybe 48 hours would only work for 1 book or a short story, rather than a manga.
see, i try to write stories similar to mangas all the time. however... i always find so many flaws in the story...