Well the back is too high and the neck should be more rectangley. Also the eyes are too far apart. Canines are preditors so their eyes are forward faceing, and deer are prey so their eyes are on the sides. :P
The belly starts at too low a point, like, it doesn't seem to start at the point the neck ended.
Also the back seems a tad high.
that probably made totally no sense so let me redline really quick what I mean:
http://i52.tinypic.com/abkspw.png
other than that, it looks pretty good to me, very cute stuff here x3
I love the head actually. But as everyone said a bit of deer in it but I think that gives your style artistic difference and individuality. ^-^ What stands out for me is the torso. The shoulder seem to be a bit farther than it should be. Your torso also reminds me of a deer.
I think it looks like a canine bust with a deer like y structure. >3< ;;; I love the eyes by the way. =]
I really love your headshots x.x
I agree with Wind, it does seem like there's a little bit of deer in there c:
The only thing I see is that the head looks a tad too small for the body, but that might just be me^^
Looks really nice so far~
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Also the back seems a tad high.
that probably made totally no sense so let me redline really quick what I mean:
http://i52.tinypic.com/abkspw.png
other than that, it looks pretty good to me, very cute stuff here x3
I think it looks like a canine bust with a deer like y structure. >3< ;;; I love the eyes by the way. =]
Sorry If I have horrible critique. OTL
I agree with Wind, it does seem like there's a little bit of deer in there c:
The only thing I see is that the head looks a tad too small for the body, but that might just be me^^
Looks really nice so far~